Comments for Hayley Rathburn's Blog http://hayleyella.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Sun, 13 Sep 2009 18:28:48 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on This Course so Far by hrobison http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/09/03/this-course-so-far/comment-page-1/#comment-8 hrobison Sun, 13 Sep 2009 18:28:48 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=40#comment-8 yay hard work! so far your work is stellar...thank you for bringing your informed voice to the conversation... yay hard work! so far your work is stellar…thank you for bringing your informed voice to the conversation…

]]> Comment on Plot Arc of “The Most Dangerous Game” by hrobison http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/09/10/plot-arc-of-the-most-dangerous-game/comment-page-1/#comment-7 hrobison Sun, 13 Sep 2009 18:27:06 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=45#comment-7 on the edge of over-summary, but effective use of focused language such as "tone shifts" and discussing the "highest point of the arc" etc...the point when the reader realizes Zaroff hunts humans is an important "turn" in the narrative, although the point at which the prot and ant come face to face is later in the story.... on the edge of over-summary, but effective use of focused language such as “tone shifts” and discussing the “highest point of the arc” etc…the point when the reader realizes Zaroff hunts humans is an important “turn” in the narrative, although the point at which the prot and ant come face to face is later in the story….

]]> Comment on This I Believe by Grandma Williams http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/this-i-believe/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Grandma Williams Sat, 04 Jul 2009 18:18:41 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?page_id=38#comment-6 Oh Hayley, you make me so proud to be your grandmother!!! Your "This I Believe" is so beautifully written. I can not imagine being able to write such a lovely piece even at my age now let alone when I was 17 years old. You are just AWESOME and I love you so much!!! Grandma Oh Hayley, you make me so proud to be your grandmother!!! Your “This I Believe” is so beautifully written. I can not imagine being able to write such a lovely piece even at my age now let alone when I was 17 years old. You are just AWESOME and I love you so much!!!

Grandma

]]> Comment on This I Believe by Giddings http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/06/10/this-i-believe/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Giddings Sun, 14 Jun 2009 03:12:23 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=39#comment-5 I really resonate with your experience here. I hope you're feeling better... I really resonate with your experience here. I hope you’re feeling better…

]]> Comment on Examples of Anaphora and Zeugma in the Inaugural Address by JFK Rhetorical Devices Database | Giddings Noodleblog http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/02/24/examples-of-anaphora-and-zeugma-in-the-inaugural-address/comment-page-1/#comment-4 JFK Rhetorical Devices Database | Giddings Noodleblog Wed, 25 Feb 2009 15:26:45 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=10#comment-4 [...] Anaphora and Zeugma: Hayley R. [...] [...] Anaphora and Zeugma: Hayley R. [...]

]]> Comment on Examination of “Just Asking” by Giddings http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/02/10/examination-of-just-asking/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Giddings Fri, 13 Feb 2009 16:47:36 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=7#comment-3 Strong analysis, Hayley. Strong analysis, Hayley.

]]> Comment on “Developmental Patterns” Assignment by Giddings http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/2009/02/05/developmental-patterns-assignment/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Giddings Fri, 06 Feb 2009 22:10:05 +0000 http://hayleyella.edublogs.org/?p=3#comment-2 Very nice work, Hayley. Very nice work, Hayley.

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